Reading this poem
do NOT;
Attempt to read "in between the lines"
(for those tiny spaces have been
filled with white-out)
& read only what is written
DO;
take everything written
here literally
for graphite on paper,
& pixels on a screen
do not
have a sense of irony,
or the ability to comprehend
"metaphors"
do NOT;
seek a "another truth"
from what has been written here
for
the only truth
is the one intended
and do NOT
you ABSOLUTELY MUST NOT;
attempt to find
meaning, symbolism
and or themes
for i can assure you
everything written here
says exactly
what
it
means.
feedback please? (and yes, i lied, please do try to read in between the lines)
ReplyDeleteI think it speaks of a bigger picture. The restrictions put on us by the "authorities" or the "adults" maybe... I love it.
ReplyDelete...I think I took this too litterally. But (after re-reading it) I think it shows the creative restrictions ungratefully bestowed upon us by society. Love it! I especially like the strange formatting.
ReplyDeletethe format isnt strange. it's actually really ordinary....
ReplyDeleteright?