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Wednesday, May 18, 2011

raindrops

In the clouds

Raindrops converse

wanting to see

the world

waiting to fall



suddenly

released from

white prisons

of solitude

descending from the

heavens

in a rush

they see

green fields

growing cities

until

with a splat

they hit

rainbow colored umbrellas

cold asphalt

and die

surrounded by the beauty

they yearned for

their

whole

lives

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4 comments:

  1. Lian .DWednesday, 18 May, 2011

    Hello. Could you tell me what you think about my poem? What do you think it's about?

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  2. sammywritesWednesday, 18 May, 2011

    I reallllllly like this, I feel like it's so simple but so complex at the same time! Great Job!

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  3. SarahThursday, 19 May, 2011

    I LOVE THIS POEM!!!!! i love how the raindrops look at whats below and think it woundrous but it ends up killing them. I just wonder if the raindrops were happy with what actually was or if they were let down.

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  4. Lian .DThursday, 19 May, 2011

    THANK YOU! and whether it was worth it or not? that is the question i wanted to leave people with. i feel like its profound.

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