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Thursday, January 19, 2012

Trapped.

I'm trapped.
I can't get out.
I'm all alone.
I'm suffocating.
My body is being smothered.
And breaking,
Into many, little pieces.
I'm trapped.
Someone help me,
Before it's too late.

Not my best..

3 comments:

  1. You want to know what the first thing i would do if i was traped i would probably find some materials to make a drum so that i can make a drum and make loud banging noises so it can be heard far away, what would you do.

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  2. If i was in thi ssituation i would probably make a drum like material so i can make loud noises to be heard far away.

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  3. Based on the images depicted in the poem, I believe the room in which you'd be trapped in is rather small. This could compromise one's drum-making abilities. Do you have a back up plan?

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