1:There are three squirrels on the curb of Lamberg street, all the acorns have been eaten an their side and they wish to cross the busy road in search for food.
2: The first squirrel is too scared to risk being hit by a car and stays on his side.
3: The first squirrel dies of starvation.
4: Crazed with hunger, the second squirrel blindly dashes into the street.
5: The second squirrel gets hit by a van and dies.
6: The third squirrel carefully watches the cars and calculates his time of passage through the busy road.
7: The third squirrel makes it across.
8: Immediately after his victory, the third squirrel is shot by a careless teenage boy playing with his fathers hunting equipment.
9: The third squirrel dies.
10: There are three dead squirrels on Lamberg street.
This is really good. I love the irony of the poor squirrels, and especially how the story builds up to the last squirrel -the one meant to survive- and when his ray of hope is fulfilled-- he dies. Well done!
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ReplyDeleteI liked it. I loved the way the first two squirrels die and the you expect the third squirrel to live yet he dies to. it was shoking i did not expect it! good job
ReplyDeletepoor squirrels. I guess In the end, the last squirrel wins. The other two died in blind fear, while the last died feeling accomplished. Since death is bound to happen, it's better to do it right.
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