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Friday, March 4, 2011
If Beauty is in the eye of the beholder, well so is Imagination.
I also loved it, because it was short, simple, and sweet. I could picture my face reflecting off a crystal clear lake. The part "The clouds will be my pillow" reminds me of my childhood, because I used to think that clouds were fluffy and I could lay down on them just like a pillow. I could relate to every metaphor and use the senses to bring them to life great job.
Love it...I could picture this as a part of a lesson taught to elvish people for using magic in some future fantasy story (hint)!
ReplyDeleteI also loved it, because it was short, simple, and sweet. I could picture my face reflecting off a crystal clear lake. The part "The clouds will be my pillow" reminds me of my childhood, because I used to think that clouds were fluffy and I could lay down on them just like a pillow. I could relate to every metaphor and use the senses to bring them to life great job.
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