Purpose and Goal

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Monday, March 21, 2011

I am Uncomplete.

I stare blankly ahead,

eyes not focused on what is in front of me,

But rather on a wish.

My hands are typing without me thinking

This really must be what i feel inside.

All around me is cold, in the inside too

My throat is filled with broken glass, and I can not even manage to speak

I try and try, but nothing seems to go right.

Throughout my years, i have not seemed to learn

I still get hurt.

Time just seems to lap over, when i want it to stay in one place.

1 comment:

  1. You write some beutiful images....you need to revise this for phrasing and structure though....some of your lines are awkwardly phrased.

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