Purpose and Goal

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Friday, March 4, 2011

The One with Power, Knows Best.

The wind will push my dreams farther

my hopes even closer

This is the turning point,

Its my turn now.

I promise not to hurt, just to make things better

To cradle the world in my small worn down hands

and never let go.

1 comment:

  1. Love the emotion...I think your opening image and word choice for the wind is beautiful...maybe continue that wind/air movement imagery thoughout the rest of the poem to make it more cohesive.

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