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Tuesday, February 22, 2011
My Title is Untitled.
These words are my sins my heart is where they belong when i speak them i studder when i hear them i cringe i wish they did not know how to own me how to control i have lost all sense i used to know when they fail i am to blame
You absolutely killed it with this poem!!!So bitter and strong and the irony of the words being used to express the emotion being the cause of the emotion as well. WOW
You absolutely killed it with this poem!!!So bitter and strong and the irony of the words being used to express the emotion being the cause of the emotion as well. WOW
ReplyDeleteI'm sooooo jelous. i loved the way you used powerful words. I felt like you were screaming at me. It was so good. Loved it!
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