Shaking the thin plaster walls
And the frail girl
Who sits curled in a ball
In the shadowed corner
To the myopic eye
The room looks well-kept and ordinary
A dim lamp illuminates a faded paisley couch
And casts a dim glow around the tattered walls
A grandfather clock ticks against the wall
As second by second goes by
But under closer inspection
You notice the broken picture frames
And the shaking form of a child
She keeps her head down
Under the protection of her thin, quacking arms
A looming shadow blocks the faint light
Casting her shadow into darkness
Burly hands grab her by her hair
And she muffles a scream
Knowing it will do her no good
She is slammed against the wall by her neck
With a force so strong
It sends the room spinning
Her heart beats loudly in her throat
As she clammers for air
Gasping, waiting, knowing
That he always lets go
"He loves me, he really does,"
She thinks, trying to hold on
She slides down until her feet
Have reached the floor
Feeling the grip lessen
But the color doesnt rush back into her eyes
Nor does the rush disappear from her ears
All thats left is the sight of a shadow
Stalking through the door
And the faint ticking of a grandfather clock
good use of repeated image with the ticking of the clock...wondering if there is anything symbolic there? Also, why the second person POV (just a pet peeve of mine). Great emotional tone.
ReplyDeleteSorry about the second person, I just didnt know how else to word the line without having 'you' in there. And yes, the ticking clock was sort of symbolic for the only thing that might stay the same and constant when everything else is changing, like you can always rely on the clock being there ticking away no matter what is happening.
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